- Garbled
- Muddled and inarticulate though could possibly enrich tone
- Rambling
- Speaking hysterically
- Not coherent; wanting cohesion; loose; unconnected;
physically disconnected; not fixed to each; -- said of material
substances.
- Wanting coherence or agreement; incongruous;
inconsistent; having no dependence of one part on another; logically
disconnected.
- Amended
- Assembled (film) for screening
- Before and after it, Ed made amendments
- Before and after it. Ed made amendments
- Checked and corrected
- Corrected copy
- Did some word processing